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Feb 5Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

So much insight and clarity in these few paragraphs. Marvelous. My understanding of this type of transition just expanded...as did my heart by your generosity in sharing this knowledge!

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Feb 5Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

And the character building that’s led to this has done just that—has led to this, delivering Michael to this response to this situation. The inevitable response given who he is. Plot as a function of character, in the best way

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Feb 4Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

Whoa. It's been decades since I saw the Godfather, and I held my breath in watching these clips. Your analysis was a class in itself. Oh to be one of your students! Like you, I will try to remember to reflect "am I in the hospital corridor?" at pivotal life moments.

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Feb 4Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

SUCH a great scene—and what a terrific analysis!

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Feb 4Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

I feel like I’m still in class! This was transformative to read, thank you

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Feb 4Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

You make me want to be a writer, a director....anything where I can put these amazing tools to use. Today I am going to take the afternoon off and rewatch The Godfather for the umpteenth time. Thanks, Al. Always wonderful to read your remarkable teaching.

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Feb 4Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

Such a perfect scene. Rewatched the movie a couple months ago. Forgot how great it was! Then rewatched number two, as one would. Oh well! Everything can’t be great!

Your insights are great, though! A real gift! 💝

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This is an amazing essay! so much to think about. and thank you for reminding me of Al Pacino's dreamy face

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Feb 4Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

I love this. I’ve always loved this scene but now I understand why.

My favorite thing to do on a Sunday morning: wake up early, read Alice’s (always smart and insightful and useful) essay, then fall back asleep for a bit, thinking about what I’ve learned and how to apply it to my own work. Simply the best.

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This is brilliant! I love that you use Michael’s transformation!! BRILLIANT.

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Feb 4Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

Incredible! I love how you describe the conditions of transformation: aloneness, with either darkness or blinding light. I feel that by reading your column, I'm finally getting that MFA, bit by bit. :-)

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Feb 4Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

Oh this is wonderful, Alice. And watching Pacino here, I can almost hear him, "I am the Captain now".

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Feb 4Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

Wow! Thank you for this wisdom!

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Feb 4Liked by Alice Elliott Dark

Love this, absolutely brilliant!

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