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Carey Miller's avatar

Thank you for this gorgeous, inspiring piece. The minute I started reading, I thought of the Michelangelo story—and there it was. Beautiful description of how we write and how our individual creative works emerge. Makes me want to keep writing…!

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Elizabeth Rosner's avatar

This is lovely. I'm a swimmer as well as a writer and writing teacher. And I've encouraged writers over the years in nearly this exact same way ---- to write with a quiet trust and faith that the book (or piece) already exists somewhere. All they really have to do is find their way toward it, to meet it there.

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Ann Edlen's avatar

As a lifelong "almost daily" swimmer, I loved the wisdom you shared about swimming towards what already exists. The effort, of course, must be expended, but how comforting and motivating to know that the body of work already exists, just ahead! Thank you.

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Elise's avatar

Bon Voyage, my sweet and thank you for letting me come aboard, figuratively speaking.

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Nancy Star's avatar

It’s always kind of thrilling to read something that feels exactly right, especially when it’s beautiful expressed. Thank you for the thrill of hearing truth! 💞

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Lisa Williamson Rosenberg's avatar

Your words always inspire me, Alice. Your books and this space. I love the swimming underwater metaphor so much. Feels so spot on for me and my amorphous WIP right now! Thank you.

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Celine Keating's avatar

Thank you for this wonderful essay, and the beautiful way you express these ideas. You perfectly capture the tension between studying and learning from the greats while at the same time finding out own way. And ... wonderful recommendations - love the notecards etc. and really fascinated by the interview.

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Lea Sylvestro's avatar

Every time I read your pieces, I envy your students. What must it be like to have you as the "listening teacher" helping me swim? Having had many a red marked paper and many a rejection, I can only imagine the gift of your guidance. XO

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Susie Middleton's avatar

This was very helpful, Alice - thank you.

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Nancy M. Williams's avatar

Alice, you have become a writing oracle!

I love this: When we reach the end of a book and have the great satisfaction of a sense of inevitability, the writer has managed to uncover a story that existed as an organic entity when she began her work.

And this: Corrections are telling us we should be writing other people’s writing.

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Cyndi Lee's avatar

This is so spot-on. I often have this feeling of something on the edge of my mind that I want to put down on paper but I know I can't find it until I start writing. The ideas blossom in the action of writing, using my body and not just my brain. Thank you for explaining it so beautifully. Somehow having this frame around that experience allows me to relax into it more. You continue to inspire me as a writer.

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Hugo Dos Santos's avatar

❤️❤️❤️

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Erica Lansdown's avatar

I swim almost everyday in water and everyday at my desk so this post meant so much to me. Thank you for all your brilliant insights. Keep them coming!

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A. C. Burch's avatar

This is a great way of thinking about the process. Thanks for the gift!

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Leslie Lord's avatar

I can imagine you swimming in the pool and can understand a bit more of the process that writers must undergo to create a story. Not unlike Michelangelo and his carving (editing) with marble…

I look forward to reading your new book…Friendship Point is still resonating with me.

Leslie Lord

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Craig Pleasants's avatar

“the writer has managed to uncover a story that existed as an organic entity when she began her work.” Love this idea. I posited something similar-but perhaps too far-last week in the post Art without Artists.

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